Wednesday, 18 May 2016

science investigation

Sun is 4.6 billion years old. The surface of the Sun is like a hot asteroid of larva. It is made up of boiling, fiery gases. We need the Sun for light and to keep us warm. The Sun doesn’t move it stays in one place, only the Earth moves. The Earth takes 1 year to get around the Sun. It takes the moon 1 month to get around us. The Earth is on a Axis. This affects the changes of the season and it changes the temperature. There is more than one phrase of the moon, it’s not always a full moon or a half moon because it is moving around the Earth. It takes one month for the moon to get around Earth.

WALT science investigation
descripion: I am writing about the Sun the Earth and the Moon

buddy mark
feedback: I think its really good information and very interesting.
feedforward: you have done very good.

Self Assessment :
Success Criteria: I can
Peer Assessment - Science investigation about the Sun, Earth and the Moon.
NAME: Poppy
  • Clearly states the relationship between the Sun , Earth and the Moon.Screen shot 2016-05-19 at 1.15.24 PM.png
  • Has a diagram, animation or videoScreen shot 2016-05-19 at 1.15.24 PM.png
  • Explains the  purpose of the SunScreen shot 2016-05-19 at 1.15.24 PM.png
  • Explains the purpose of the EarthScreen shot 2016-05-19 at 1.15.24 PM.png
  • Explains the purpose of the MoonScreen shot 2016-05-19 at 1.15.24 PM.png
  • Comment:  I think I  did good

Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done?

Comment: I think you did  a good job in this good work  nice work.

1 comment:

  1. KIa Ora Jayden, I agree with your Buddy, your information is great. Maybe next time you could make sure you have a diagram or photo's on your blog. Ngā Mihi, Rosie