Wednesday, 13 April 2016

Two star and a wish

W.a.i.t. Make to make two star and a wish

Description making two star and a wish

Feedback great job

Feed ward get your spelling right because it is hard to understand 





Advertisements

W.a.l.t. Making a a Advertisement 
Description: I am advertising  about the skate park

Feedback.
I think you did very good and I think I might want to go to the skate park
Feed forward.
Next you could add a bit more language in to it but good job




Tuesday, 12 April 2016

Sunday market

W.a.l.t. Creating an invention from a the story
Description: this is are plan for the Sunday market we are doing it on minecarft
Feedback: I like your target it's nice and creative  
James⚔⛏🔪
Feedforward: you need to make your handwriting more clear






Thursday, 7 April 2016

Star and a wisssssssssssh

W.a.t.l. Two star and a wish

Description: every Friday we do two star and a wish

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Evaluation: I did good at making two star and a wish I am proud 

Feedback: I really like you poster it really cool.
James⚔
Feedforward: next time put a because in it.